13 November 2012

Seraphina - Rachel Hartman



So I read The Night Circus and I didn't like it all that much. Then I read Seraphina, and I want to hoist it above my head and wave it about at infodumpy fantasy authors as an example of How Shit is DID.


It's clear that Hartman took completely to heart (HAH) the old advice of "show, don't tell," and carefully went through her manuscript to excise out all the telling. (It's that second bit that's tough, I surmise.) She expects you to pay attention, and if you do, you'll figure things out. But if you don't, that's ok - you'll get the story anyway and it will just be less subtle. Do you need to know what a houppelande is? NO! So she doesn't tell you until the (very funny) glossary at the end of the book. Was I - a textiles nerd - tickled that she used the proper word for a medieval tunic worn my both men and women, recognizable in such films as The Lion in Winter and Robin Hood, Prince of Thieves? You bet your dagged sleeves I was.


Gratuitous Katherine Hepburn in The Lion in Winter. Seriously,  how did anyone dare to do this play after she and Peter O'Toole took every actor anywhere to school? Ahem. I digress.
She also understands my soul, as evidenced in this sentence describing something that happens to me on a regular basis:

"Some sober part of my brain seemed to observe everything I did, clucking disdainfully, informing me that I ought to be embarrassed, yet making no move to stop me" (p. 324).
Definitely written by a woman who has had her share of I-swear-on-my-eyes-once-I-find-them-I-will-never-drink-again moments.

The world is beautifully realized, well-researched, and, in an unusual, why-didn't-I-think-of-that twist, the dragons are the clear, scientific creatures with an astonishing ability to create mechanical objects, and humans are the superstitious ones.

The whole thing is just charmingly imagined, and as we've established I have very little imagination but I'm very particular about reading the imaginings of other people, so you'll just have to trust me. Someone pass me the liquor.



9.5 out of 11 Medieval Villages Left Standing after the Dragon Scourge

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I do not like books with dragons. JUST saying. I'm not sure why. I just do not.

That being said, YAY QUOTE and this seems like a worthy book thing.
1 reply · active 645 weeks ago
I grew up on Anne McCaffrey and Melanie Rawn, so I love a good book with a dragon on the cover. :)

It's a pretty worthy book. :D
So normally fantasy isn't really my thing. BUT your review and that quote? I am intrigued.

I especially like you said this is good at "show, don't tell" because having a book or movie or TV show explain something that should be obvious to ALL CHARACTERS is so annoying. You need to figure out a better way to get the info to your audience
1 reply · active 645 weeks ago
I definitely like fantasy better than sci-fi; it's my go-to for fluffy escape. So I'm probably more likely to enjoy it than your average person, but that being said, it was pretty good. And for all my raving about debut novels, this one was a welcome exception.

The show-don't-tell thing is SO HARD in fantasy because you have to explain the world, yea? Even good ol' J.K. Rowling stumbled somewhere in chapter 1-2 of all the HP books. But this one was really, really well done. If for that alone, I'd give it a shot.
Oo, I could read this just for the glossary. Sounds like the writing in this is fantastic - love the quote! Plus the use of a Katherine Hepburn gif automatically adds this book to my TBR pile. It's a given.
4 replies · active 645 weeks ago
Hahaha! I love me some Katherine Hepburn. Philadelphia Story is The. Best.
*coughs* Woman of the Year is.
I haven't seen it! But I'm actually partial to Lion in Winter. I had to watch it twice in a row because the first time I couldn't pay attention to the plot for all the amazing acting going on.
Also, Adam's Rib. These are impossible to choose between.

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